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COMA

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                                    coma  

I have my eyes closed but.i can´t open em
   I hear voices, but I don´t recognize them.
   where I am? why everything seems so distant
   but also so nostalgic?  
   my mind is stuck in wonderland
   where everything is confusing and chaotic
   in  middle of fantasies and Illusions
   floating on a landscape  
   between dreams and nightmares
   and there's no escape
   everything I do fails to make me wake.
   I'm trapped alone on this odd place
   floating in the cold space.

   
   
   
   
   
   
     
   
   
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Icemaya's avatar
Nice one dear :heart: